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Alright, so aside from the obvious, this is a fan-ficiton of the modern Sherlock instead of the unique Sherlock, I'd like to point out the difference in diction between the ...

So I'm going to do this review to the first ellipsis. First thing first, I'm really curious if you got the names of the family members from somewhere, like a ...

Lets switch it up a bit? I feel like this poem needs more variety to it. It's almost like you're telling a story where you have a set number of ...

So I feel like the inconsistency with the capitalization for the I is going to go over people's heads unless you consistent capitalize 'You' until the end, or faith. Playing ...

Alright, so I have some bones to pick with the poem. First off, it is all telling. I want an example of when ignorance is bliss because I really don't ...

The poem seems to drag on for a while before we get to being free. I feel like you could shorten it up by establishing to begin with that there ...

This poem really escalated cutely. I like how you have the speaker of the poem cautious sand unsure about what they are getting into when this person gives them passed ...

This is really cute. You have a few inconsistencies with the pattern though. First, the last line in the first stanza needs to have a look taken at it. Consider ...

AHHH BOLD! THAT'S LIKE ME WRITING THIS ENTIRE REVIEW IN CAPS. So overall, I feel like the poem needs less rhyming and less caps too. You don't need Pass capitalized, ...

So this poem has a little bit of work that needs to happen for it to really shine. First off, I think putting me instead of what the wings are ...

So this poem is something that shows perfectly how things can be very self oriented instead of the outside world. I really loved the opening stanza, it drew me in, ...

The sing songy nature of this really gets interrupted by the fifth and sixth line, I think that shows that they need some editing. Personally I would rather you show ...

mould - mold check it's in the first stanza to see if you want it is, or its possessive like you have later. All in all, this poem is really ...

So I would suggest that this poem does more of the thing at the bottom and less of the things at the top. Title it Rain Can... then omit rain ...

Alright, so this poem is a little ambiguous, and that is part of what I love. I love how we cannot really tell if the speaker is talking about a ...