Aley

Hey Weirdo, I have to say that I think this poem has a lot of really good content. You're dealing with a very touchy subject of death in a manner ...

Hey GreyMatters, Here I am as requested! Thanks for giving me this opportunity to review your poem by requesting a review in my thread As you didn't give me any ...

Hey Traves, I'm really glad to hear from you about wanting something reviewed. I created my thread because of BRB so I'm glad to see it's getting some traction. You ...

Hey FalconerGirl9086! As one of my requirements for Better Review Bereau I have to rescue an old work from the Green Room. Your work is that work! First off, I ...

I'm back again~ Overall I like how this story is developing still. You're taking us through the beginning steps of a friendship, showing us the way that they interact in ...

Hey, me again. This one needs some work too, same as before. I'm not going to go over the specifics again because I already did that once and I think ...

Hey Eros, Aley here to review for Review Day. First off I have to say that I like that this story takes a direct approach to solving a problem rather ...

Hey, Aley again, this time reviewing for Review Day. This still needs some more things splitting up the talking. I think this section is better about the who what where ...

Hey, Aley here to review for Review Day I have to say that this would be more endearing if I was a mom. I'm sure it's very touching to them, ...

Yeah okay. Hi, I'm Aley and I'm here to review your poem for Review Day! We do this thing once a month where we try to review a whole bunch. ...

Heey~ Aley here to review your poem! Welcome to YWS Here on YWS we like to critique with the Young Writers Society Critique Sandwich which I will now show you ...

Hey, Aley here to review for Team BlueBerry Muffins~ I think that you're trying really hard to make this a poem that makes you think and consider all the angles, ...

This is really cute. I can see why it's in the leaderboards. I think what it does best is know it's audience. You clearly are familiar with YWS enough to ...

Hey, Aley here to review for Team BlueBerry Muffins~ First off, I have to admit that this poem took me a couple times to read through it and really figure ...

Hey, Aley here to review your poem for Team Blueberry Muffins! I'm here to review your work. I like how you're handling the metaphor all the way through. You do ...