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Hey Dreamwalker, I'm afraid I'm not as enthusiastic about this as the others, but perhaps that's just because of my perspective differences. I like what you're trying to do. It ...

Hey, Overall, I think you're doing a great job with the wording and emotional punch to this piece with the imagery and vividity of the examples. I like that. What ...

Hello Lady Evvy, I like the world you're creating. You seem to have a good emotional grasp of your characters, and their interactions, and the world at large around them. ...

Hey Emoticon, I really like that you're sticking to imagery in this poem. It makes the poem very cool to read. You've been forced into some really unique connections like ...

Hey Casanova, I'm actually somewhat disappointed in this poem. I was hoping for something a little more intense. I like what you were going for here, that you were working ...

Hey Zolen, here for a review. First off, this is a really interesting perspective on something in every game, dungeon bosses. I really like that element of the story. I ...

Hey SnazzyPencil, Long time no talk! I miss you

Hey SereneSimpliciT, I'm glad to see a new poem by you and get a chance to review it. I like that you're exploring capitalization in this poem with your line ...

Hello KingQueenKnave, First off, I'd like to say that you do a good job of making the tone of the piece match what it's about. I think the tone in ...

Hey Lightsong, Compared to the other poem, you worked on clarity and improved a lot of it in this poem. I really like that you changed up your style to ...

Hey, here's my review. I'm writing this while we're talking. First off, I love how the scenes individually are full and created in their own space. I can get a ...

Lol, this is cute. I like the twist at the end. I think you could probably say "How's it look?" instead of "Your hair is done" since that's more of ...

Hey DoulosForCrhist! Welcome to Young Writers society. What I really like about this poem is the parabola that you've created with getting the speaker into the deepest depression and then ...

Hello kman134, First off, I have to say I found it really cute that you put a warning because of anime references. Most people would just throw them in and ...

Hello! Overall, I like that you took the time with this poem to really delve into the idea of the butterfly effect, and explain it to the reader. I think ...