Aley

Hey PrincessInk! I'm really happy with the word choice and flow of this poem. Word choice can be really hard to get right, but I love that you worked through ...

Hey Biluata! I'm personally not one who likes to consider reviews that are "harsh" good, but at the same time, I've been considered a "harsh" critic with some of my ...

Hey Fort! It's been a long time since I've read your poetry, so I was really excited to get into this one when I saw it only had one review. ...

Hello AgyeiJohnson20, First off, I have to say that I like what you're trying to do here with the end rhyme. It feels like you're trying to make a poem ...

Hey Ghost223, I have to say that I think for an emotional situation [bullying] you've handled spelling out your feelings about it well. I can completely understand the indecision about ...

Hey Tigeraye! First thing first, I have to say that when I started reading, I did not expect the ending. I will say that the drama in this made me ...

Hello TheStormAroundMe, I really like this poem. This is something I've felt myself before, so I think I connected with it because of that mostly. Like, I could totally imagine ...

This is exactly the idea I was looking for! I think you're still getting a little tripped up though. I don't like the fourth to last stanza "yesterday, you closed ...

Hey Apricity, Overall I didn't really like this poem, honestly. It felt a bit forced for me. I do think that your stanza breaks are good, and your line breaks ...

Hey Carethersr, My name's Aley and I'm going to be giving you a short review. First off, welcome to YWS! It's really great to see new faces! I'm super excited ...

Hey dystopianmonkey01, I was really happy to see you reviewing, so I decided to come give you a review! That being said, I'm going to be following the YWS Critiquing ...

Hey LittleMiracle, This is a hard one to review! Mostly I'm caught up between the beautiful way this sounds and acts like poetry with the flow of the meter and ...

Hey Lumi, here for your challenge. First off I have to say that I like the shape of this poem because it reminds me of the motion of a hummingbird's ...

Hello Scribblekins! First off, I want to say that you have a wonderful way with writing Lily's internal thoughts in the second half of this story. I really like that ...

Hello beccalicious94, I'm really happy to see that you wrote a villanelle. I think the structures are really underutilized. That being said, I'm super happy to see how well you ...