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AkuRashomon

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  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: My Sunflower

    I was looking in the Green Room for some romantic story, the I found this. This is really cute! I love how much you gave descriptions to the characters without ...

    Dec 17, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: What are clowns exactly?

    Hello, @vampirecone6783. This is a pretty nice poem. When I was younger, I get scared with clowns, maybe it's because I used to watch horror trailers with clowns and get ...

    Dec 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Home

    Hello @stygianmoon17! This is a very good writing of yours. Sometimes when you feel lost, away from your home and your family, you can feel down and sad. And if ...

    Dec 14, 2022
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Hannah’s doll

    This story is nice. Hannah has a very beautiful yet weird personality. I never got attached to a doll before that's why I think she's kinda werid but I mean ...

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: too tired to dream

    Hi, thank you for making me cry. I saw scrolling in the Green Room and I wanted to read something sad. I've never felt this way but ouch! To this ...

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Dark Ones

    Wow! This is a nice poem of yours. I love how your words painted a lot of pictures in my head. These type of poems just calm my mind and ...

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: brother, when?

    Wow, your voice is really calming. When you're in a bad mood and when you miss someone, it will be such a great thing to listen to this. The harmonizes ...

    Dec 12, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Theatre Re: what is, but not i?

    Oh my, I wasn't expecting the last line. It is very dramatic yet short, I thought I was going to get more explanation. To me, this person is questioning about ...

    Dec 10, 2022
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: The Day I Chose Daddy

    This was sweet. Well, I am a daddy's girl too but he won't make me ride a bike because he says it's not good for girls. Although, the memory of ...

    Dec 10, 2022
  • Poetry » General, Action / Adventure Re: the road of memories

    Now this poem makes me miss having road trips and traveling with my family. This story is pretty realistic too. I like how I get to imagine my family and ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: My Happy Place

    I like this. Your happy place is similar to mine and like the vibes are just great. I imagine how all these words turn to pictures in my head. Even ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Carlo

    This is a pretty good story to read for me, looking for something to read about troublemakers in school. I never experienced regular school and seen someone like Carlo in ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: an ode to absence

    Wow, this is nice and detailed yet deep. I love how you get to express your feelings for your father. How you flash memories is just perfect and like not ...

    Dec 8, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: soulmates or other miscellaneous things

    When I read the first lines, I felt that Christmas air, like that sensation, y'know. I felt the refreshing and nostalgia/old vibes. It is very imaginary, picturesque and creative. It ...

    Dec 7, 2022
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: You Fell In Love Again, Silly Idiot

    Oh, nice one! You wrote that for your crush and your story reminded me of mine. It's silly how it seems like this boy lives in your mind rent free. ...

    Dec 7, 2022


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