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too tired to dream

by LadyBug

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Tue Nov 15, 2022 12:53 pm
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vampricone6783 wrote a review...

This poem seems…sad. Left behind and feeling forgotten. Like one could get lost in the feeling of memories and time. But just because one is left behind, doesn’t mean that they are forgotten. She will be found once again and her dreams will have fleshed out into reality. One day, she will be found. Until that day, the only thing left to do is dream, dream, dream…

I wish you a marvelous day/night.

mashed potatoes are v a l i d
— Liminality