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Re: A Place No Human Should Live
Hello! This poem delves into the emotional weight of climbing personal or metaphorical mountains, and the burdens that come with such journeys. The contrast between the flat plains and the ...
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Re: Is it enough?
Wow. I enjoy reading this. It’s a thoughtful piece that captures the essence of feeling like a small player in a much larger narrative. This poem beautifully explores the hesitation ...
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Re: Rowan Tree
Hello! I really like the poem. The poem is a beautiful reflection on change and nature, showcasing your ability to merge personal experience with the natural world in a way ...
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Re: a poem about missing
Hello! Here's my review! This poem is a heartfelt exploration of presence and absence, capturing the bittersweet nature of longing with vivid sensory detail and emotional resonance. It captures a ...
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Re: angels
Hello! Here's my review! This poem beautifully captures the yearning for something divine and perfect. The repetition of "I have prayed for angels" creates a poignant rhythm, emphasizing the speaker's
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Re: Seyar the Chair
Hello!!!! This poem offers a charming and empathetic perspective by personifying a chair. The repeated phrase "I stand here all day" effectively highlights the chair's dedication and the often-overloo
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Re: My grief is a matter of utmost discretion
This poem beautifully captures the quiet, personal nature of grief. The imagery of the kitty sitting on the speaker's lap for the last time is touching and poignant. The metaphor ...
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Re: Time Passes
Hello! Here is my review. 1.What in the poem stands out to you? The sunset imagery really stands out. The description of the orange crests and white sparks in the ...
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Re: Love in despair.
Hello! Your poem, "Vain is the love," reflects a deep exploration of love's complexities and the yearning for security and tranquility within it. You start by asserting that love becomes ...
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Re: YOU, all in capitals
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Jul 17, 2024
Hello! Your poem, "i want you to write my name with acid," creates a vivid and evocative picture of desires and sensations, expressed in a raw and poignant manner. The ... -
Re: Man, wouldn’t it be so easy
Hello! Your piece, "Man, wouldn’t it be so easy to run away," captures a serene and nostalgic moment of contemplation and companionship. The imagery of escaping to a sunlit paradise, ...
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Re: "dear god" by Xaney
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Jul 17, 2024
Hi! Your piece, "I Did Nothing Wrong," tells a powerful story of feeling betrayed and cast aside. The protagonist, feeling unjustly treated by their father for speaking up and defending ... -
Re: Solstice- Chapter 1- The Last Abnormality
Your story dives deep into Valerie's world with a rich, immersive narrative that captivates from the start. The opening scenes evoke a sense of mystery and danger with Valerie's fearless ...
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Re: Echoes
Your poem really digs into the rollercoaster of emotions we all feel in relationships. The way you repeat phrases like "what to do?" and "playing it all cool" hits home—it's ...
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Re: Forgotten Yet Remembered
Your poem beautifully captures the emotion of discovery and reunion with a loved one. The imagery of seeing the girl from behind, only to realize she is your deceased mother, ...
Jul 17, 2024
