AdoxagraphyAngelus

I really enjoyed this. :) There's a lump in my throat that just won't go Away This being the only word on this line makes it seem like you can't ...

That was really pretty, though it lacked some point. That just added to it's prettiness, though. :)

This poem made me want jelly beans. Thanks. ;P I really don't know what to say, other than that I enjoyed this. It seems kind of drablle-esque, and there's nothing ...

Beautiful, tragic, amazing. All words that could describe this poem to a Tee. Not only because I love the Titanic, but that was beautiful.

Aw, this was cute and comedic. :) I really enjoyed it, and it gave me a good laugh.

Haha, this was surprisingly comedic. I love how Derek took the poem literally. It was really cute.

That was really, really good. It immediately pulled me into it, and, if it's true, you did a very good job of explaining your confusion about your rage.

Thanks for the comments- I'll see what I can do about the rhyming. :)

our poem really that bad that no ones reviewing? ;P

I'm no poetry queen, so I'm glad to have you as my partner for the pairs poetry contest. I really like the emotion this holds, and how the words flow ...

Thanks for the review, Micki-More. :) I'll go fix those things now. I'm a little comma happy... There, I said it. XP And I've never remember the difference between there ...

This was really well put together. The concept of living is dying and dying is living is very true. Kudos to you for a wonderful story.

Dude... That was seriously haunting. It made me shiver. Seriously. It was crazy good. (This is quite an I'm-in-awe review. XP)

That was really good. You really took such a simple topic and made it into so much more. When I saw the name, I thought it was going to be ...

That was pretty epic. That's all I ca say about it, sorry. XD