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What I thought of this as a whole: It could be improved. It's a bit confusing in some places. Also, it seems like her father is waaaay over-board protective. Maybe ...

This was short, sweet, and well-written. :) My hand reflects my work Callused fingertips Ink-stains rampant. My work reflects my soul Raging emotions Tumultuous feeling. My soul reflects my God ...

This was really good. :) Am I everything you place me to be? Am I beautiful, amazing, kind, caring? How can you think I'm so great? You all place me ...

This feeling I can't ignore Comma A sense of emptiness and isolation Comma Teardrops from the heavens start to pour As I sit here in the silance Silence instead of ...

I'm in this place again ( An 'I' needs to be here. Can't escape What is this dream again? What is this dream again? That doesn't really make much sense. ...

There were only two stanzas that I found had a mistake in them. :) I walk with the shifting shadows My friends, companions They hold me in their presence And ...

That was... Written very interestingly. It was not what I'm used to reading, and it was extremely well written. The way you went into detail, but not too much, left ...

This was waaay good. :) I can't find anything bad to say about it, so, well done. :)

I am caught in the middle of an uncontrollable storm. Only you can calm it. I am forever lost, constantly trying to find my way. Only you can lead me. ...

How can you not see the pain? For me, it's obvious as the rain That pounds on the roog Roof , on the house, on the door, For me, pain ...

I very much enjoyed reading this. There are just a few things that could be fixed to make it even better. :) Kelly O'Brien was surrounded by white and cream ...

I really enjoyed reading this. There are just a few small things I'd like to point out. :) "So how are you?" He didn't dare to look me in the ...

I really enjoyed this. It was written a bit simply, but still, it was very enjoyable. :) There are just a few mistakes I'd like to point out. My name ...

This was really good. I have just a few suggestions to make the poem flow together better. I am afraid, as old wounds reopen I am distracted, as your beauty ...

This had my eyes glued to the page the whole time. It was amazing. You knew you were in trouble when you stopped sweating. You had finished off the water ...