AdjiFlex

Heya. AdjiFlex here. So... this was a really short chapter you wrote. With a chapter this short, you should really try to ensure that there are zero errors. The short ...

AdjiFlex here. Alright so I liked this piece for a number of reasons, but there is much that can be done to make it a bit better. Firstly, I absolutely ...

This is truly a calm and majestic piece. Without even getting into the story here, which is quite dreamy and seemingly very metaphorical, your language use is really interesting. You ...

So this poem here touches on quite a number of precepts that are fundamental to reality: courage, strength, friendship, love and hope. Quite a though-provoking poem, although I sort of ...

Nice, "serene" (you used that world like a hundred times) story you have here. I get the feeling that this would work even more effectively as a poem. There is ...

Ah so this is a simple poem - or so it seems at a glance. I like poems like these. They are simple and specific and leave lots of room ...

Heheh. Let me now challenge myself to give this poem a full-fledged review! (This will be fun) So, the poem's title is longer (in letters anyway) than the poem itself. ...

I have indeed struck gold again here! Even with zero dialogue, I would have kept reading. The entire environment is brought alive (more literally than usual with the lots of ...

O...K. This is crazy. The escalation was really frightening and quick, and things changed from normality to hulk and cavemen. This is one weird piece of writing you got here. ...

Welly well well, I see you have people tearing up here, which is a testament to the high level of emotion in your poem, so good work then. A bad ...

Well, well, well, I have found here a pot of gold I see. The descriptions here are possibly the best I've seen on the sight overall - pretty darn impressive! ...

Well, this was a good read, first off. Nevertheless, I will start with something that needs fixing. In novel or chapter-length pieces, a reader might forgive one or two typos, ...

AdjiFlex here to give a review... So your speaker here is a child that was stolen and the whole ordeal was completely ignored by whoever the "you" represents. Problem is, ...

Alright let's dance! So this poem had a lot of movement involved. I wonder if the letters are italicized because that makes them look like they are swaying. Whatever the ...

Alright so poems about love are cliche. In order to talk about love, death, or any of these overused topics in poetry, one must add a new dimension, a new ...