Adeera

this is Beautiful! and inescapably sad. therefor you did a really amazing job! i really don;t have anything to say besides that fact that i'm impressed and that i really ...

this was well written i liked how you said everything and you got the point across really well. as for a title i don;t think i can help you there. ...

Amen. good job!

wow. for some reason i really liked this one. but i didn't really understand it. i really like the second stanza! it's beautiful! you do an amazing and flowing job. ...

dude this is hilarious!! i love it!

aww i really liked this! its sweet and it reads so easily that i found my self not even really reading it but more like it was reading it's self ...

beautiful job right here! you always have the most amazing poems. I really like this one. keep me posted! ~ Adeera

Thanks guys! I'm glad you like it

wow . . . this is excellent!! you really covered the scary and the fun aspect of growing up! nicely done! ~Adeera~

wow you wrote this when you were seven?!?! really nice job!!!

hmmm i like this one. i got a bit of a drifting feeling, almost like it was a lullaby. good job !!

ooh very nice, i find myself feeling like this a lot and i really love your word choices. when i read the last line it really just echoed in the ...

once again panda I marvel at your writing abilities!! wow, short sweet and to the point. very nice! thanks for telling me about it. if you ever need a review ...

yup this is definitely a keeper !! good job there area few places where it didn't flow as well as it could have but other than that i really like ...

i like this a lot . it's a very chilling piece, nicely done it flowed well it was easy to read and you really get a sense of the hard ...