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Hi Glimmerglass! This is really striking. This is brilliant! Haikus are really hard to write. For some reason, most people just can't manage to fit all of their thoughts on ...

Hi Iamnotperfect! I like this. I really don't think it's that weird. I like the way it flows a lot. It's really hard to get a poem to flow without ...

Hi Kiicoh! I like this poem, and I beg to differ from Dr. Jamie Bondage; repetition is not necessarily incorrect grammar. Even if it was incorrect grammar, it would be ...

Hi Retrodisco666. First things first, I'll go through and edit some technical things. The surgeon is the artist and has talent with the blade. The man with the palette has ...

Hey Crimson! I have one correction, but it's pretty vital: your soul sours to the sky. Sour isn't a verb, unfortunately. Hmm. That's kind of funny, though. I couldn't imagine ...

Hey Emmyloud1995! This is just fabulous. When I read the first line of this poem, I thought about clicking away, because usually poems that talk about themselves being poems are ...

Hi Huff Puff! I'm here upon request. Sorry I haven't gotten around to writing your review yet. All of the technical stuff has been pretty much cleared up, so I'll ...

Hi xXShadowPeopleXx, I'll be reviewing for you today! Hi, I’m Alexander Ford; please just call me Alex. And yes, it’s Ford like the vehicles: however, I hate Fords ! I’m ...

Hi Kingolions! I like this poem very much, and I find it very easy to relate to. How loud is the beat of silence so loud inside my mind. I'm ...

Hey PenguinAttack. Maybe you could break this up into shorter sections, because not many YWSers are going to have the time to read a whole big chunk of work right ...

Whoa! That was awesome! The metaphor, everything! However, it wasn't exactly poetry. I mean, it didn't have line breaks or figurative language -- except, of course, for the underlying metaphor. ...

Aw, this is so sweet! There is just one line that I don't quite get ... God, why did you take her first and leave me to cry, with my ...

Hi Chazzer! I can find only two little mistakes. (I love the icon, by the way.) I’m a child in the corner and I’m scared. I am scared. You’re the ...

Hi Jon! Nice poem you have here! Aside from what Shepherd said, I can see only two little flaws. Perhaps not flaws, but bruises, or weak spots. In any even ...

Hi Leftnoa! I didn't really get this poem, but not all poetry is meant to be "gotten." I see myself as crippled You don't need the word "as" here. Tripping ...