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This is a wonderful poem. Lyrically it was heavy which gave me a vivid image of this piece. The piece also looks like something you really took your time to ...

Hi i really liked the poem, i have written pieces like this (concept wise) and with me i've realized that what carry's you on to finish the piece is the ...

I've just realized that you are 13, I have to say for a 13 year old this is an amazing piece. I couldn't write half as good as that when ...

HEY GUYS READ THE POEM BELOW, ITS THE SAME POEM BUT A DIFFERENT STRUCTURE!! An Insomniacs Dream Scrutinise the blueprint I'll be in the sky where the moon is Opposite ...

Simply Beautiful.

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I think this a great poem, it's a pretty dark but that takes nothing off your writing which is nothing short of beautiful. Even though the poem is Metaphorical, it ...

Thank you guys for the replies, all the comments have taken into much consideration and i believe i am now a better writer So Thanks Again Guys, I Really Appreciate ...

This Was Great Well Done, Ive Seen a Few Poems Related With The Sea But This Is By Far The Best One I've Come Across Great Job Keep It Up

This is a very well done poem, the concept is great and i can relate because i feel this sometimes when im trying to write a poem well done and ...

Wow this poem opens up a new page of imagination, to the fragile i believe they will see this as disturbing but this is because there missing the extended metaphor ...

It is very short however very sophisticated, it sends out a clear emotion to the reader and this is the pivotal part of the poem which i believe you should ...

It is very short however very sophisticated, it sends out a clear emotion to the reader and this is the pivotal part of the poem which i believe you should ...

It is very short however very sophisticated, it sends out a clear emotion to the reader and this is the pivotal part of the poem which i believe you should ...