AaricaRae

Hey, I'm Aarica :) I'm here to review your poem, which is 100% SPOT ON AND COMPLETELY ACCURATE. Sometimes I feel like no one else gets me or understands me, ...

Hey! I'm Aarica, and I'm here to review your poem. I loved this! The way I could perfectly see what was happening (also known as imagery lol) was amazing! The ...

I read this about ten times, and am still utterly confused about what in the world happened. I love poetry, but I always wish every poet would give a background ...

The detail in this story was completely breath taking. So many plot twists! It was awesome how you stayed on track with every single twist, even if it was completely ...

This was deep, and I am so glad you are able to say that you have found peace. :) I am really curious, how did you find peace? When? Why? ...

Holy lot of wow factor!! This was completely like.. WHAT JUST HAPPENED?!?! Was this just suicide? Yes? No? I'm sorry, I'm kind of slow haha. I would REALLY love some ...

This is very heart felt, and absolutely magnificent! Near the very end, you put "family's." The correct way would be "families." Also, "Storms" should be, "Storms' " Just a few ...

This was fantastic! Writing has always been a passion of mine, and I am so lucky to have found a website where I see writing like this, and know that ...

Hey girl, welcome to YWS! :) Don't say your writing is rubbish, all writers are different and have their own special way of writing. :) I'm a grammar freak, I'll ...

This is very deep. I could see what all was happening, in her thoughts, memories, and real life. Very great detail. I personally think you should add what happened to ...

This is so true. As a writer, sometimes I feel like only I will read my stories, or only friends or family will cheer me on. It's lovely to find ...

Even though this is a very short poem, it has a lot of meaning, and a lot of "feels." I've personally struggled with depression, and was put into a hospital ...

Woe. WOE WOE WOE!!! This was like... omg! This was so good!! So, "Matt Bennett" killed the REAL Matt Bennett? Seems legit. This was an awesome story, how the future ...

I think you had good intentions for this "inspirational" story, but I feel as though it was rather hard to read, considering there were so many grammatical errors. I, by ...

Woe. Like seriously, WOE. What in the world just happened here?! Haha, I loved it, it was really good :) I found literally NO grammatical or spelling errors, which is ...