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This is great! It's simple and to the point, and doesn't beat around the bush! Like the other reviewers said, this perfectly captures the character of Peter Pan. It also ...

Ok, I intend to leave a more coherent review this time, so here we go. In this chapter, while it is still really good, I did notice a few things ...

you jerk. you just made me feel worse. BENS BROTHER WAS THE ONE THAT RAPED JUNO? LARJEAKLFSDKLMFAWKLMRFASLMFLKMEL~AHJRSMCKLEHTADMLCMWEKLJTRAKLSDFKMEAKLJMSKDFNMEKJAKL~SDFMLK%WEJHAKSLDFNM

you. bastard. I have no words for this review, you sick, twisted, author. WHY DID YOU DO THIS? WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME LIKE THIS? I'm GOIJNG TO CRY ON ...

YOU MONSTER> YOUY MONSTER YOU UGH I am not even coherent anymore YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER AND I HATE YOU FOR DOING THAT. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT... T>T ...

Oh. No. oh no no no no no no no no no nno no no no no no no no no no n o :C HOW COULD YOU, YOU CRUEL ...

D: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ok sorry for the long, drawn out scream of horror. But I thought she was just screaming in her mind,

THIS CHAPTER WAS LIKE...THE PROLOGUE TO THE BEST PART OF THE BOOK! O.O Amazing work there!! :D Is Ben going to kiss Juno? They fit so perfectly :3 I normally ...

I love how you described several of the pranks that Astriea and Adrian pulled! Some of those look like ones I would like to try myself...lellelelel. I am really curious ...

This is great! Ok, this is one of my favorite chapters so far, and like Noelle said, Asteria got what she deserved. She does come off as slightly childish, and ...

Oho! Here we go, another great chapter! I never thought it, But i'm shipping Frey and Adrian so hard right now!!! O>O I KNOW HOW THE FANGIRLS FEEL NOW! This ...

GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR WHERE IS CHAPTER ELEVEN? :C TELL ME. (I think you might have accidentally typed 12 instead of 11... :P I love the tension building up her

Hey, another great chapter! However, I decided I would show you one worthless little grammar mistake that nobody really cares about. Here you go! XD "Ben James The Boy With ...

"English Knowledge-Demon" An old, wrinkled hand slams down on my desk like the clutch of a crazy person’s cold fingers around a poor, innocent kitten’s neck. The blue-veined appendages of ...

Ben James The Boy With Two Names YOU CANT STOP ROYAL. THE NICKNAMES KEEP ON COMING! Another long chapter, awesome! Your chapters continue to be entertaining and realistic. I'm sounding ...