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Wow, this is great! I love the "burning" forests of autumn, and you certainly capture that image in your poem. "They linger, hesitant, To kiss the earth, To join the ...

First off, I love your twisting of "painting the roses red" into something more thoughtful and more interesting. "Why not paint the roses blue, for the serenity of the whole ...

First off, this review might be a little critical of your work, but don't take it the wrong way, I'm not being mean, I'm just giving an honest review. The ...

This was great! It works well as a prologue, and the only thing I'm disappointed about is that there isn't the rest of the book here, so, WRITE FASTER! you ...

Well, first off, this is not a script. A script is a story which also involves the views of where the shot for the moving would be being taken, what ...

The idea of this story is very sweet and beautiful, the execution, though, I feel is a little lacking. I sense that it's supposed to be dramatic and stir up ...

I like your concept of the "Hunters". It gives the story that post-apocalyptic, sci-fi, and even fantasy feel, which is to say, it's just different, and different is good. One ...

Well, I can't say that I like Pokemon all that much, so most of the charm of this story is probably lost on me. I suppose that if you are ...

This was very fun to read. You use a lot of great descriptions that really bring up images of the city and the gardens. “I’d love to,” Braxton said, staring ...

This, I say honestly, is not something that I enjoyed reading or liked very much. Not that it wasn't interesting, but there was one major problem that really irked me. ...

First off, Haiku's are hard to make worth the three second read, but this one is not bad. I like that it brings out an interesting argument, "I am not ...

Wow, very interesting. When I picture winter, I'm not thinking about color, just whites and grays. But from your poem I can definitely see how there is a lot of ...

Haiku's are difficult. You're writing a few lines of words which are supposed to convey thought and meaning to the read, yet you have so few words to actually use. ...

I love this poem. The symbolism you use is so beautiful and it really explains your point well, while giving the poem a sort of, mysterious, yet heart warming affect. ...

Wow, this is very beautiful, yet so dark and sad at the same time, as it's so true to life. I know a lot of people, mostly girls, who have ...