AEChronicle

AEC here for a review. I'm changing the way I do it, and this will be the first time I actually go through and give my full opinion, so, you'r ...

First off, when I started reading this, I rolled my eyes and sighed, literally. This is all one gigantic paragraph, a lot of repetitive sentences and words, and you instantly ...

This was very beautiful. It is rare that I find a poem that has the simple and sweet grace, which is not difficult to create, coupled with a deep message ...

Lol, this was awesome! The last two lines are the best, as this is exactly how it seems in the history books, and I wouldn't be a bit surprised if ...

This story was fun, and I could really picture being a younger child and enjoying the bouncing and trouncing of the boat over the waves. As for the review, I ...

First off, this is interesting, but I'm not exactly sure what the message is. Unless there's not really a message at all? If only I could feel the water, And ...

This was so sad. A pathetic clown is depressing, and it really is a great symbol to choose for this poem. I asked you to hold my hand On the ...

Short, simple, and sweet. I liked this poem because of this, but I would have to disagree, as I feel that day dreaming is what has kept this world alive ...

Lol, this is awesome! In a lot of ways. First, I have been working on a sci-fi steam punk novel that follows the same plot as your book so far, ...

Forget everything I said earlier. Yes, this piece needs work, but what piece doesn't? It's definitely interesting, and I was drawn in to the story as you don't stop to ...

First off, you really pump out some works. Most of your poems aren't what I usually look for in poetry, i.e. Edgar Allen Poe style, but that doesn't mean they ...

I like this. You cover a very simple, yet interesting topic, and keep it simple. I like that you haven't blown it out of proportions with some big and over ...

Wow, this was amazing! Literally. The way you've formatted and written this is not only something I've never seen, but it flows so well. The third to last stanza is ...

Please note that I'm not being harsh or inconsiderate or rude, I'm just giving an honest review and not trying to offend you. With that in mind, I don't feel ...

Well, first off, I was a little worried and skeptical when the story started to become about Barney. Not only is associated with childish things, but it kind of is, ...