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I know this isn't actually a story or anything but I thought I'd help you get it out of the green room because I'm on a sort of mission to ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review :-) First, I'll just point out that in the title you spelled "Thousand" wrong. I'm guessing it's just a type but I thought ...

Hey, Che here for a review! I'll start by pointing out any areas I feel could do with a little improvement :-) Then move on to all the positive things! ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review! First of all, I really liked the message you were trying to get across within this poem. It read really well and any ...

Hey, Che here for a review! I keep seeing new chapters pop up and figured I should probably go back and read them from the beginning, right? So here I ...

Hey! Che here for a review :-) I will start by saying that this isn't the usual type of genre I will read but it captured me eye! So bare ...

Hey, Che here for a review! I've been meaning to read and review this for quite a while now, as it's been in the green room for ages; so here ...

Hey, Che here for a review! I spotted this buried in the green room and thought I'd help it get out by reviewing it. First I'll just note down any ...

Hey! Che here for a quick review! I'll just start by pointing out a few things I think may need improving. Of red and orange. This line seems a little ...

Hey, Che here for a review! I'll start with any areas I see that could do with some improvements! His paintings just somehow screamed the emotions she was unable to ...

Hey, Che here for a review! I will just point out some places where I see grammatical/spelling errors or areas that I think need improving while were holding hands. I ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review! First of all, I loved how you were able to tell a story in such a short amount of words, complete with a ...

Hey, Che here for a review :-) I'll start by pointing out some areas I think could do with a little improvement. She was fiddling with her necklace when the ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review! Growing up in India, I was taught respecting animals. This would make more sense if you said "I was taught to respect animals" ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review! I'll first point out any grammatical errors or typos I see . The suicide that they found hidden in one of her many ...