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I could really feel the emotions you portrayed in this. In fact, I have felt exactly like this many times before! I liked the structure, as it really feels like ...

I could really feel the emotions in this. It had really great imagery :-) However, I do wish the rhyme scheme had been a little more consistent, as it started ...

The rhyming in this was really nice, and worked really well! I also really loved the structure, as it flowed well and sounded really great when read out loud :-) ...

woah, this was so hard hitting. It was so brutal, truthful and full of the kind of raw emotion and expression a lot of people are too scared to put ...

This poem was so powerful. The Emotions were so strong and apparent. Though I do not relate directly to drink, this did strike pretty close to home and helped the ...

Hey! I liked the rhyme scheme in this poem. Internal rhyme is often hard to do but you did it well in some places. However, i think it would have ...

This poem was so emotive, and it's clear that when you wrote it you were trying to get across the emotions that it portrays which you did very well. I ...

Hey, first of, i really loved your poem! It had some really amazing imagery and I could really feel the emotions shining through. The enjambment added a great effect on ...

hey there! Che here to review your poem! Well, I say review, but there isn't really anything or me to say other than WOW There's nothing i can critique. I ...

hey! This is pretty amazing poem considering it's your first one! First of all, I'd just like to point out in the line "It all in the same" you probably ...

I just had to read this when I saw you said it had been inspired by Sherlock Holmes! I genuinely think this is amazing. The description was great and really ...

Hi there! First of all, it does make me what to read on! So well done with that :-) However, I do think it would have been better in past ...

First of all, you should really work on structure. You should put it into separate into paragraphs in order to make it easier to read, and follow. One big chunk ...

First of all, I'd just like to point out that in the first line you put "other" when i think you meant "others" :-) There was a lot of long ...

Hey there! This was genuinely a brilliant poem. I loved the structure, and the repetition of "I don't care" and everything else that was repeated. I especially liked the last ...