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Hi there! One more chapter to go! I like the action in this chapter, but again it was still pretty fast paced. It suited this part better though. I just ...

Hey there! I'm trying to finish all the chapters today as I'll keep it short. So this chapter felt WAY TOO fast for me! You don't need to rush through ...

Hi there! I'll keep this one short. It was fast paced like the last chapter, but not as fast. I like how we now learn about this Shadowscale being and ...

Hey there :-) This piece was beautifully emotive. I'm unsure of how to phrase how I feel of it, but I'll just say I now really want to read this ...

I'll be quick on this once. I liked this chapter. Very informative BUT like a previous review said, Isaac's characterisation is unclear. I know it's a story, but of course ...

Unfortunately, having her parents maimed and in the hospital, and having her house burnt to the ground wasn't what Alice considered "normal circumstances. Though it's not wrong, you don't need ...

Hey there! I'm slowly making my way through your chapters! I think you know how I structure these now! :-) Isaac Johnson was standing at a disaster sight Nice opening, ...

Hey there! I'm hoping to get to chapter eight sometime today, if I stay on track. I think I owe you a lot of reviews since you've done so many ...

Hey there! So I know you asked me to review chapter eight, but I decided to start from the beginning and so here I am. I'll start with any place ...

Hey there! I loved this chapter. The MC's love for Nidhi is just adorable! You've created such a great character within your story, because I really care about him and ...

Hi there! I'll start by pointing out grammar mistakes etc. If things did not turn out the way they should have with someone; I started feeling lonely. This is an ...

Hey there!! I'll start my review by going through and seeing where I think you could improve this chapter :-) The morning sun found its way through the shutters of ...

Hey there! I was looking forward to reading this! This was a really exciting chapter, and I liked the introduction of Obraya. I hope she comes back! “Blimey.” Will started. ...

"Do you believe in ghosts?" I used to ask Maa when I was young. I think this should be a line by itself, and the rest of the paragraph should ...

I'm so sorry it's taken me over a month to get round to finally reading and reviewing this! Anyway, you really have me intrigued here. Your writing style is so ...