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Re: Wis-per Chapters 6-7
Hey, Che here for a review! Of course, as always, I will start by pointing out areas that need improving! It was like a unique charm whenever Lillian put it ...
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: Wis-per Chapter 4-5
Hey, Che here for a review! I'll first start by pointing out any areas I think could do with some improvements! Lillian and the boy made it halfway down the ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Eagle Rock / Jay
Hey, Che here for a review! I've seen this floating around the green room for a while and figured I'd help you out by reviewing it! First,I'm just going to ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Pensacola Star
I know this isn't actually a story or anything but I thought I'd help you get it out of the green room because I'm on a sort of mission to ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Thosand Years
Hey, Che here for a quick review :-) First, I'll just point out that in the title you spelled "Thousand" wrong. I'm guessing it's just a type but I thought ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Churchgate Slow
Hey, Che here for a review! I'll start by pointing out any areas I feel could do with a little improvement :-) Then move on to all the positive things! ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Failure and Success
Hey, Che here for a quick review! First of all, I really liked the message you were trying to get across within this poem. It read really well and any ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Abnormals (Part 1)
Hey, Che here for a review! I keep seeing new chapters pop up and figured I should probably go back and read them from the beginning, right? So here I ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: The Variants
Hey! Che here for a review :-) I will start by saying that this isn't the usual type of genre I will read but it captured me eye! So bare ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: Crocuses
Hey, Che here for a review! I've been meaning to read and review this for quite a while now, as it's been in the green room for ages; so here ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: Dahlia and DnD
Hey, Che here for a review! I spotted this buried in the green room and thought I'd help it get out by reviewing it. First I'll just note down any ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: Autumn winds
Hey! Che here for a quick review! I'll just start by pointing out a few things I think may need improving. Of red and orange. This line seems a little ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: Pride Goeth Before the Fall 1
Hey, Che here for a review! I'll start with any areas I see that could do with some improvements! His paintings just somehow screamed the emotions she was unable to ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: Need
Hey, Che here for a review! I will just point out some places where I see grammatical/spelling errors or areas that I think need improving while were holding hands. I ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: The Captain
Hey, Che here for a quick review! First of all, I loved how you were able to tell a story in such a short amount of words, complete with a ...
Apr 7, 2019