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i adore poems that trace or talk of ancestors and family members. I truly think we are indeed the creation of all those who came before us, and I often ...

From this poem, I get this real sense of insignificance, that the narrator feels voiceless and isolated emotionally. The narrator is often unheard, and ignored, and it was something I ...

I love the humour and warmth in this! You really effectively convey the sense of anxiety that me and i'm sure a lot of others also experience when trying to ...

This was a beautiful, lyrical, poetic piece of writing! I honestly have no criticisms or suggestions, it reads like a creative essay and you explore these existential questions very creatively ...

Beautifully tender, romantic and youthful. It feels like this poem captures the intensity of a first love. The reference to Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet in the first stanza kind of ...

This was so mysterious and intriguing and I nEED to know what was going on. It was so eerie and unsettling, building up tension slowly until there's this sort of ...

i love how short this is, it kinda feels like i'm watching a tv show and we've skipped to the next scene to find out more about the other characters. ...

This poem is so raw, visceral, and unsettling but in the 'best' way, in that it really had me hooked, pulled me into the emotions behind it. The gruesome yet ...

This is a beautiful poem that really resonates with me. The melancholic feeling is ripe and rich through the imagery, and the structure of the poem - broken up into ...

okay I have reviewed a few of your amazing stories and NOW I FIND OUT YOU'RE A MARBLE HORNETS FAN?? Amazing!! I never thought i'd find another MH fan again, ...

I loved the idea for this story! These innocent kids playing with beautiful fairies and then subverting the trope and making the fairies evil! I think you have a great ...

This is honestly an amazing piece of poetry!! It has teenage angst, a real feeling of powerlessness and disillusionment with society and its structures. I understood the car to basically ...

wow, i really felt the emotions from this poem. I really related to a lot of it! I really liked these lines: For the words I hacked out of me, ...

okay wow, i was not expecting that ending! I love how you have played with the societal expectations; the narrator's worries are pushed away by her mother, the boss not ...

omg so i actually love spiderman and i've never played the game but my younger brother has and when i watched his play through i thought it looked amazing, so ...