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I like this one just as much as the other. I have many of the same things to say about this one as I did for the first chapter. Oh ...

Hey! You did great! I've only read on of the Worriors books but from what i read you have done a wonderful job. I get the same feeling and even ...

What is a sore sheet? This was good. I really like how you started it out, minus how I don't know what she sore sheets are. I also really like ...

That was cool. It was different from everythign thing else I've seen here before. I like it. Is is a like poem story thing? I liked how you went back ...

Wow! That is an amazing poem. It was very enjoyable to read. I can tell you are very good at writing poetry. I am not so I am in awe ...

That's pretty cool. I haven't ever really been into hockey and that poem made me really want to be into it while I was reading. The verbs brought emotion to ...

Hey, It's a random person here to give you a review I liked it. I love it so much when the title ties in really good and is repeated in ...

That was really funny, but I feel like you could have gone a little bit more with the act natural, like maybe the girl notices somehting is off with the ...

That title is perfect for this poem. I really get the feeling of being trapped when I read this. So a few things I liked: Redundancy, I like how you ...

Wow, wow ,wow! That was awesome. It's one of those poems, sotroies, moments, in life when everything else is tuned out. I really liked how you kept going on with ...

Wait so is the house the animal in your mind? I love how you left so much to interpritation so it can mean something different to everyone who reads it. ...

Wow, I liked the ending. The whole time I was imagining a paper you were going to write on or draw on, but the kite! That was awesome how, well ...

I'm so glad other people realize that about beauty. I believe too much today that the world looks on your outter appearace to judge your beauty. I strongly believe beauty ...