2019aquarious

I feel like this captures a messy breakup where you’re switching between wanting to forget the person from your brain and wishing they’d just see how much you’re hurting. I ...

I like the riddle vibes that the poem gives at the beginning, asking questions that may or may not be rhetorical, maybe just wanting to be said rather than looking ...

I feel like you can feel the exhaustion radiating from the words in the poem. I don't know if the lowercase I's were intentional, but it adds something to the ...

This poem is really powerful—it’s strange, beautiful, and emotionally intense in a way that drew me in right away. It feels like you’re kinda working through something deeply personal, and ...

This poem really stuck with me — it’s kinda strange but in a beautiful way I guess. How you talk about language and connection, it feels super emotional, almost like ...

Is this a sort of urban myth legend type of thing. It kinda reminds me of the monkey, which is a movie, but has the same concept, a small wind ...

I like how the person showed up unfashionably late, the glamour is taken away and is just reduced to sadness. The change that the person goes through is described very ...

I think you did a really good job encapsulating Carter with him being distracted by the pencil eraser. The fear of public speaking is real. It is so much worse ...

This poem was really touching. I can relate to it since I also lost my grandpa. I like how you added in activities you did together. The repeating lines really ...

I really loved how it rhymed and flowed. You have really good vocabulary used in this. I kind of imagine this takes place at like Christmas or something. I think ...

I am a little confused. Do you mean snow angels like the little prints made by flapping around in the snow or something else. Are faeries like really small or ...

Ooh I love the cover art. This reminds me of a reverse sort of situation in the book Wool. Your descriptions are so vivid, I feel like I am there. ...

First of all, I love that this takes place in suburbia! I love how the mom immediately says it's fake. That feels like a very mom thing to do. For ...

Welcome to the young writers society! I love the way you describe stuff in your story. The title sounds so good. I love the characters names and the sort of ...

I also ask myself this as well. Part of me wants to make some great impact on society so I won't be blotted out of the history books, while the ...