1998

I'm gonna be honest. The way you have some of your stanzas set up made it a little hard to read, but I get your point. I'm glad that this ...

You know what? This poem is very well writing. I found that you kept your words and stanzas in rhyme. Believe it or not, but sometimes that can be difficult ...

Yo. This is an interesting poem. I do believe that you meant to say "trees" in the third line and not "tress." Also, you need to make the words have ...

Yo. Okay, this poem isn't bad. Actually, it is quite good. (: Can I be honest with you? When I first read the few lines of this poem I thought ...

Woah. That poem almost made me speechless. I knew, but didn't know at the same time that the ending was going to be like that. At first, I was going ...

You should put this poem in lines. Like this: I once knew a girl... She said once something was it could never be fixed. In some sense she was right ...

I can't say I have ever experienced this sort of situation, but I've seen it happen with other people and movies. Not sure if that counts, but whatever. Your way ...

Very well done, Purple. You did a job well done on this poem. Even though your poem's short, you did a very good job. Keep it up, fellow writer. I ...

Yo. I'm 1998. I was actually going to do a poem on the attack on Paris, but I didn't know how to put it into words. You just did. (: ...

Yo, Biluata. I'm 1998. Wow. This is really good. In a way I can understand what you are feeling in this poem. Don't take that weird in any way. I'm ...