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That was really interesting. I like how detailed the world is and I would like to read more of this if you ever write more, because this whole story feels ...

Okay, to stat with "A MEGA ,ULTIMATE, RAINBOW, HYPER BEAM OF DEATH!!!" is a pretty funny parody of over the top special attacks. It made me chuckle a little bit ...

I like the idea of this overall. It builds up some interesting ideas which could be added on to if you are going to add more to this story. I ...

Wow, I can relate to this. I am mostly quite introverted but it mostly depends on the situation for me usually. I really like the poem On the second line ...

I really like the 2 line long stanzas. It helps give the poem a unique flow wich really does work. I also love that instead of using names letters were ...

I found this to be a really intersting story and i liked it. I thought it was interesting and I like how it ended. the final sentence was simple but ...

I have never heard of a drabble but this is really cool. I really loved itI like how even how short it is it can still tell a very intriguing ...

Welcome to Young Writers Society. I am quite new here too. I have only been here for a few weeks and I am still quite confused but i am starting ...

I really like this so far. From the beginning this story really grabbed me and would not let me go. I love the final sentence in particular it portrays some ...

I really liked it. It is short but it is still packed with detail. It perfectly captures the end of the world. One thing I noticed is that the final ...

I really like the use of second person in this. It works really well, to get the reader into playing the part as a character in a way. It also ...

Wow, this is amazing. My only suggestion where you can improve is that there are some coma splice errors which is where commas are used to hold multiple complete sentences ...