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Hi, I'm Stupid and I'm gonna review your story :) The first thing that strikes me after reading that was the dialogue. I, personally, suck at using dialogue and try ...

What I love most about this piece is that it's brave. It reminds me of an epic poem, the ancient greek version of a story, yet you've thrown in a ...

Hi there, I know you've already had three reviews and that's normally quite enough, but I read the first two sentences and decided I had to review this. So, first ...

I liked this a lot, it's nice to see an extended metaphor here rather than just a straight-up story and this one works really well. It's an emotional, believable story ...

Hi there, I'm gonna be reviewing your story first, for which I feel greatly honoured. I'll start by going through and seeing if I can find any spelling/grammar mistakes and ...

Ahhhhhh. I had to sigh and relax a little after reading that, it was very good. I always find I like a poem more when I feel I can relate ...

Hi there, I'm going to attempt at a review for you here, even though this is a little short. But some of the shortest stories are the ones that hit ...

I didn't really understand what was going on, though I get the feeling this is supposed to be more about an emotional point in time, rather than a fixed narrative. ...

I loved this, it's very powerful and feels like it comes from the heart. I'm glad you shared it. I thought personifying the different emotions flying around at a time ...

I like the message of this poem. I know it's sad watching somebody with a head on their shoulders waste their talents because they know they're pretty. Your vocabulary is ...

I liked this, though I was imagining a comic accompaniment the whole time. If I hadn't read your note, I may have seen it differently, so if you want to ...

Oh my god. I usually review these things and suggest things you can change, but this was just so perfect. Don't change a thing! Your description, the way you draw ...

Hiya! I'm Stupid and I'll be reviewing your story. I'm gonna go through as look for any mistakes or errors, then I'll give you my oerall impressino at the end: ...

At the moment, I'm very upset, as I just wrote a substantial review, using plenty of examples and was very proud of myself. Then I accidentally closed the tab and ...

Here's a review, just for you :) First of all, I'm going to go through and pick out any little things you way want to tweak, then I'll get on ...