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stars whispered, gates closed. fear mounted, as red sun rose. a new day dawned, a battle won. people mourned, for what had begun. ... I would post the next verse ...Nov 15, 2004 -
i need you as you need i everything we see its eye to eye conversations last for hours as we sit in fields of fragrant flowers worlds apart yet still ...Nov 19, 2004 -
Okay, I did this in a bit of a rush so go easy on me... it sounds better if you say it aloud though. Why the sorrow, why the pain? ...Nov 30, 2004 -
Lost in my thoughts, Fighting, searching. Long have I sought, for a way of loving. No matter how I try, No matter what I do. I cannot seem to find, ...Dec 22, 2004 -
Change is Necessary. I cannot control your role in life, And so I must despise, The way that you have chosen. I see it in your eyes. Everytime we are ...Dec 22, 2004 -
A tribute 2 Crysi... Leathery wings, Take me high. Desperately, I hold on tight. Smoke he snorts, In a puff of cloud. Fire he breathes, Surrounds as a shroud. The ...Dec 22, 2004 -
Born from ashes, Alive through fear of others. Beautiful creature, Yet hides a tortured soul. Feathered wings, Cannot bring him to heaven. Red and gold, Reflects the harshness of the ...Dec 22, 2004 -
Just a little something that I wrote in German class when we were doing poetry. The translation is at the bottom but you should try reading the German first even ...Feb 2, 2005 -
What do you feelDeep down inside?I know so many thingsare pretence, liesand exaggeration.Take off your mask.I want to seeWhat it is you hide,Beneath the lies.I want to feel your heartBeating ...Feb 15, 2005 -
Sweet dreamsenvelop mein their gentle caress.Sweet dreams in the nightwill never be real.Sweet dreamstouch me,slash at me.Sweet dreamstear at my heartand at my soul.Sweet dreamswhich I hopewill never be real.Sweet ...Feb 15, 2005 -
On our own. why do we see them on the streets.children runaway today.crying faces that we meet.people hungry everyday.a drunken man lies on the floor.rain falls on his face.thieves are ...Feb 20, 2005 -
Hmm... I don't know if this is the right category to put this in but I'm sure you'll let me know if it isn't... I tried a new approach with ...Jul 30, 2005 -
Right, here it is. It's not finished but i just wondered what people thought of it so far. The first verse repeats at the end - but the middle hasn't ...Oct 22, 2005 -
ok this is a traditional haiku; first line has 5 syllables then 7, then 5. i may add more to it but i havent decided whether or not to yet... ...Feb 8, 2006 -
Stars hang in the sky, Like pearls on a drop-necklace; A coronet moon.Feb 12, 2006 -
Chapter I The burning oil lamps gave off a faint smell of jasmine that hung like a fog in the air. The room was plainly furnished; although the rug on ...Feb 15, 2006 -
*updated version - any comments will be appreciated muchly* Chapter I The burning oil lamps gave off a faint smell of jasmine that hung like a fog in the air. ...Feb 27, 2006 -
*first draft, so very sketchy - will need a lot of help with this...* Chapter II Garam wiped away the sweat that slicked back his red-brown hair, stepped back lightly ...Feb 27, 2006 -
First poem I've posted for ages.. please be honest with me, or I won't improve. Oh, and please say if there's anything I can do to the ending. I'm not ...May 8, 2006 -
Pirates: Chapter One. I rounded the next corner, my feet making such a loud sound as I ran, and kept on running, desperate to get away. I hated how it ...Dec 1, 2006 -
I really hope this makes sense as it's sort of based on a story I was planning once. I'd like to know how it sounds to people who don't know ...Sep 19, 2007 -
Well, I know I'm not so great at fiction at the moment, but if you point out where I'm going wrong, I'll try my best to fix any bad habits. ...Sep 20, 2007 -
Freewrite this morning. Not really for anything - I was just testing out a new piece of writing software, and the first thing I saw to inspire me was 'Das ...Oct 19, 2007
