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Loved it. A person would thing that if anyone would make a poem like this (i mean the structure that's always the same) and this long, it would surely be ...

I really liked it, like everyone above. But (and here it comes) i agree Riedawriter23. It was short, but it flow well. You could have developed it a little bit ...

Loved it! Great! And you're voice here sound better... You posted this on my birthday LOL That doesn't matter anyway. I loved it! Keep working I think if you work ...

I loved it! The lyrics are good and so is the music. I'm sorry if I'm going to seem mean but you're not a vocalist. There were some words you ...

Loved it. Loved the way you worked with the words and make it flow really nicely. Very original and it seemed like you really were at war with someone. This ...

Ahhh... so sweet... Loved it. You made it work out very nicely. In my opinion, you write very well, just one thing. She got too mad about him being kissed ...

LOL that was hilarious! Everything that fell on Bella made me laugh! Antartida, that was a great one! Not screaming just capital letters xD My favorite part was: EDWARD: Yeah, ...

*sniff, eyes wet* Omg... what will happen next? She's really mad/sad (with reason). I kindda feel sorry for him. He lost the girl he liked, his friends turned his back ...

OMG! How could he? After that night, and how everything was going! *heart racing, scream* AHHHH! He... and the other ... *can´t speak properly from the shock* Anyway, good one. ...

i liked it :D it's well strutured and the words flow right. i think that's what i have too say. hum... just one question: trough all your poem you onlymention ...

Couldn't find anything minimally wrong. I honestly and simply loved it. The two versions worked together and i think it was a great idea to show the two sides of ...

Twilight... loved the books. I must admit, when I first saw this I wasn't sure if it was any good. Then I read it and I loved it! It really ...

Loved it. You use your vocabulary very nicely, say what you want, put feeling into it and make it flow together, It's an awfully good skill :D Loved the second ...

Hi! nice work, I like it. But i this time I have to agree with someone (I don't recall) that said you were making a big problem out of wearing ...

I like. Simple, clean and meaningful. Take my hand and lead me to a new life Not broken, just damaged Loved this one. nice work for your first poem. Keep ...