Published October 10, 2008
The song is at http://www.soundclick.com/13to3. It's called "Anymore".
I'm not really a vocalist... I write songs and play guitar/bass/piano...
Seems like yesterday
When it all fell apart
Seems like my mistakes
That made it all disappear
Everything i tried so hard for
And nothing that I took with me
I gave it all I had but it was
Not enough
Chorus:
I couldn't find the closure to
Leave this all behind
Couldn't face the reasons why I couldn't move on
I thought that I had won the war but I
Didn't see the last fight coming
Everything I thought that I had won
I lost it all again
Feels like losing
A part of me I left behind
Feels like taking the
Easier way out
Seems like everyday
Reliving the memories
I could've said a word
I could've changed one touch
Chorus
I didn't make this mistake
I can't make you go my way
I didn't tear this apart
I couldn't hold it together
I didn't let this go easy
I couldn't say anything
But I'm doing this my way
And you're going yours
Chorus
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Thanks for the comments - I really appreciate them.
I just record at home for fun - and to capture what I want my songs to sound like so that I can bring some of them to my band to learn.
I know I'm not a vocalist
I loved it! The lyrics are good and so is the music. I'm sorry if I'm going to seem mean but you're not a vocalist. There were some words you didn't said very well and the voice it's a bit monotonous. Loved the chorus. Sorry if it seemed harsh, but in the end I loved it
Hello!
I really really liked your song. It has nice flow and it sounds great.
I found myself singing along even though I don't know the tune you used because I haven't listened to the audio one.
Not many people can create a song that people just start singing to.
Consider yourself very gifted
Keep on writing songs so more people can enjoy them as I did
-thevoiceinside
I LOVE IT! It was really good
I absolutely loved the chorus! That was probably the best part of this whole song! Very good. Keep writing the songs! 