Published October 9, 2008
The song is at http://www.soundclick.com/13to3. It's called "Without You".
I want you back the way you were
So strong and proud of who you were
I'll remember you the way you used to be
All the time so long ago when we
Took the chance to make it best
I'll never forget the memories we made
Once I'd be lost without you
To hold me in your arms
To chase away the nightmares
And tell me it's okay
Once I was always with you
To tell you what to do
Save you from yourself
And fix the mess you made
Every touch and every sound still
Reminds me of the days we spent
I hear your voice calling out my name
Every shooting star we saw used to
Tell us a story of where we came
We won't be alone again forever, forever
Once I'd be lost without you
To hold me in your arms
To chase away the nightmares
And tell me it's okay
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This is really cool. It sort of reminds me of some of my friends. What made you want to come up with song?
Once I'd be lost without you
To hold me in your arms
To chase away the nightmares
And tell me it's okay
This is my favorite verse.
Great job, I really like it. ^_^
Thanks for the comments - I'm glad that you like the songs!
Yeah - the vocals on Anymore were done after I did the ones for Without You, so they're not as good. I really kind of want to redo them sometime.
And this songs means a lot more to me...
Loved it! Great! And you're voice here sound better... You posted this on my birthday LOL
That doesn't matter anyway. I loved it! Keep working I think if you work hard and make yourself heard you will go far! [at least in my opinion]
I loved this one. I think it's because I can relate too (it happened to me).