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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Think Carelessly, Love

    Hi! So, you said you wanted my (well, not particularly mine, but the readers) opinion, so here it goes: Loved it :D Favourite lines: Never worry about tomorrow, or fret ...

    Dec 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Repeat

    Hey! I'm gonna be your reviewer for this poem. So, first of all I liked it. But there's some things you should correct. Why can't I stop loving you? It's ...

    Dec 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: His Words and Actions

    Hey there! First of all welcome to YWS! :D Okay, so on to the review: I agree with Jiggity :lol: Late. Never early. This is very poor, since if he's ...

    Dec 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Foreward Dreams, Living Today, and Yesterday's Memories,

    Hey there! There's not much left to say since elephantwalrus said it all. These poems are short, but nice too read. You did a good job, but you better watch ...

    Dec 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Monster, A Feind...

    Hi there! First of all I have to ask you: do you have OCD? It's because a poet should almost never talk about something they have no experienced. Either way, ...

    Dec 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Waiting in the rain

    Hi there! On to the review: I agree with Ducati in most things. I actually do like the third line :D The rhyming scheme... well, you can have it both ...

    Dec 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Children and snow

    Hi there! Interesting.... I liked this. I just have some suggestions (you don't need to listen to them :D): They are attacking the trees and the houses, And surrounding the ...

    Dec 13, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Voice in Our Heads

    Hi there! WOW O.O You really caught me on this one! After the second stanza, I just couldn't stop! Very captivating. I liked it! I really did liked it :D ...

    Dec 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Loneliness

    Hi there! Good work, I liked it. But.... G ames,laughter and joy all of them I have , but I am alone. Friends, both girls and boys I have , ...

    Dec 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: How I Feel When I Play The Piano

    I don't care what the others might say but I loved it! You described exactly how I feel every time I play the piano! *sniff* I nearly cried! Of course ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Back in his Arms..

    Hi there! You may think I'm pursuing your poems, but I'm really not. your poems they just stumble in my way :D So, I'm not even going to mention the ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Angel from Above..

    Oh... so sweet and nice, and cool, and... have I said sweet? :D Hey there! I'm on a review marathon, and I think I have reviewed one of your poems ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Sytem

    Hi! First of all welcome to YWS! :D Hope you have much joy here :D Onto to the review: Don't really know what to say. I mean, it was a ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: [deleted]

    LOL that was funny! So, just wanted to point out something: Red welts on my arms when they cut me out of it. My mother bit her lip, eyeballed my ...

    Dec 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Love You

    Oh so sweet! LOL I liked it (as everyone else) :D Loved the vocabulary, it was mentioned before, but it's great. :D :D :D Anyway, great work! keep on writing! ...

    Dec 6, 2008


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