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Hey there! After so much replies I have nothing else to add... sadly, I won-t be much of a help to you... Anyway, just wanted to say I still love ...

hi there! This is good! I completely love it :D I didn't find any grammar or punctuation mistakes, but I should advise you to not use a comma on the ...

Hi there! this seems nice... kind of a first love thing, pretty basic. I didn't find any grammar mistakes and punctuation is nicely done (congrats on that, most people don't ...

hey there! First of all, this is good a bit generic but good. But your form is all wrong! You can't use this kind of structure in poetry. poetry is ...

Hi there! I agree with everything above, but I definitely loved this! But I am a grammar freak so to improve your poem, your grammar must be correct 8not only ...

hey there! I completely get you... The friends at school, that expect you to resolve their problems give advise and to you never hurt and have always a smile on ...

Hey there! really, really but I mean REALLY good! At least for me... Anyway, one of my favs! And I'm hard to please so be happy, you've done a good ...

Hey there! This is sooooooo good! it has a good story line, emotions, thoughts, depth. it lacks a bit on the rhyming but not every poem needs t rhyme (but ...

Hi there! So, on to the review! I liked this. it was okay/good :D Didn't find any grammar mistakes but something could have slipped. The surrounding darkness doesn’t help no ...

Hi there! I got to say this was just okay... It's a bit poor in depth. The times you said "She said" and " And he said", this is not ...

hi there! I'm gonna review this.... but I'm not sure what to say... First, a question: Is this supposed to be like the numbers before the line in every stanza ...

hey there! This is soooooo cute!!!!! *huge smile* I hate her guts, even though he doesn't. this is a bit confusing since, it's the first time (and last) that you ...

hey there! This was so sweet... even if the point wasn't to be sweet :D Anyway, this was good, it was like a first teenager love, and getting over with ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! F«irst of all I have to ask: Did you post this on the wrong categorie? because it seems so. Poetry has it's style and you ...

hey there! i really liked this. this is a good poem. :D i guess that's all i have to say... Didn't find any grammar mistakes, neither i would change a ...