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Hi Megan! Yay, first review! I hope, but as I will take too long to review this, someone will beat me -_-' Anyway, nit-pickys! Why does love [s]have[/s] has to ...

Hi kamasgirl! How you doing? I'm Kat, and I'm going to be your reviewer, if I may. So, on to it! First, the nit picks: it simmers at the bottom ...

Argh, Music and Dudette covered it all! Well, I will just support you. This is really good! It has a comic side, and I can easily relate to this. *Kat* ...

Hey KAYYO! Welcome to YWS. I'm Kat, and I will be your reviewer. First of all, I'd like to remind you of the rules. We have a 2:1 policy. That ...

Hey God! I'm Kat, and I will be your reviewer. This is great! I really liked it. The theme is a bit overused, but you displayed it very well. I'm ...

Hey Elle! Mind if I call you that? Welcome to YWS. I'm Kat, nice to meet you ^^ I will review this delightful piece! Down in the belly of this ...

Hi Kala! Welcome to YWS! Oh dear, this is a wonderful piece! I must say, I completely adored it! A few nit-picks: Below the branches, here about, Do not you ...

Hi Laydra! Welcome to YWS! Oh my, Selene has already covered almost everything, so I'd like to bring out your rhyming. Aside from your grammatical errors, I have found three ...

Hey there, cjscoot! Welcome to YWS! First of all, I don't want to sound like a pain in the ass, but I would like to remind you of 2:1 ratio. ...

Hey there PanicAndFlee! Darko has almost covered it all. I wanted to point out your rhyming and rhythm, since it's the theme less developed. Let's see an example, shall we? ...

Hey there m_j+kimi! I'm Kat and I'll be your reviewer! So first off, Sura has already mention the major problem! You don't have one word capitalize and there's no punctuation! ...

Hey there writergal! Welcome to YWS! First of all, we try to keep a 2:1 ratio. that means that for every post you make you should review two works. that ...

Hey there Silas Switch! Welcome to YWS. I'm Kat. Nice to meet you ^^ As Colt has mentioned above you should review other two works before you post your own. ...

Hey there Lisa! Welcome to YWS! I will give a pointless review, only to support you, because for a first lyrics this is great! I absolutely loved it and I ...

Hey there Angel! I'm Kat ^^ First off, this was good, I liked it. just a few nit-picks: You broke my heart; you made me cry. You ripped my wings ...