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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Un-Excepted

    Hi marie! I'm Kat, nice to meet you, and I will review this delightful piece of yours, even though I don't have much to say! :D The only thing I ...

    May 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: This Christmas, let's end our lives part I

    Hi Queen! Kat's here for a review -- as requested! Line by line [nit-picks!] “This is the worst day of my life,” Cheryl wailed, tears streaming down her rosy cheeks. ...

    May 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Imperfections

    Hi Brown Eyed Girl! I have brown eyes too xD Anyway, I'm Kat, nice to meet you, and I will be your reviewer for today! I was once told that ...

    May 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Great War

    Hi Heart! I'm Kat, and I will review this piece of yours :wink: I'll do line by line grammar and punctuation corrections, and sometimes some meaning or imagery comments. Line ...

    May 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: the lonley tree

    Hi GamesEnd! How are you doing? I believe I haven't met you. I'm Kat, and I will be your reviewer for today! On to it! Line to stanza comments! There ...

    May 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Tragedy

    Hi by my rules! Nice name :wink: I'm Kat, nice to meet you and welcome to YWS dear! If you need anything to find your way around, feel free to ...

    May 3, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Seven Letters

    Hi Meep! I'm here as requested, dear. I am very sad to say I won't have many things to say. This wonderful piece has already been very well criticized, and ...

    May 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just For Today

    Hi magic! I don't believe we have met: I'm Kat, and I will review your piece! So, as I took the first overview look, I noticed you capitalized every first ...

    Apr 27, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: What I want

    Hi Tiger! Kat's here as requested! :D Now, nit-picks: “Hey Marissa,” Brian said, walking towards me. Hmm, I thought, it looks like we have a bit of bait. I smiled ...

    Apr 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Light

    Hi Stella! Thank you for offering me your work to review - I'm much grateful! So, onto it! The sunshine breaking free Of cloud cover And the moon gleaming On ...

    Apr 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Buried

    Hi break my heart! I'm Kat, nice too meet you ^^ Let's get on to your review! This poem is very simple and cute. I feel the rain . ; ...

    Apr 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Vestige

    Hi Lil Pau! Kat's here - as requested! So, let's get on to it :wink: A dark crimson tinge is glimmering at the end of the horizon, reflected back by ...

    Apr 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Tell Him

    Hi Forever! Kat's here for a review - as requested! So, let's get on to it! He's all alone, just sitting there . On his shoulders is the whole world's ...

    Apr 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Do I love him?

    Hi Monakeya! Welcome to YWS! How you doing? I'm Kat, nice to meet you, and I'll be your reviewer for today. Do I love ? I don't know . He ...

    Apr 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Misunderstood me

    Hi Cheri! Welcome to YWS. I'm Kat, nice too meet you, and I'll be your reviewer. If I could have your attention for a small matter before, I would like ...

    Apr 15, 2009


There is nothing more radical or counter-cultural, at the moment, than laying down one’s cynicism in favour of tender vulnerability.
— John Green