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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: You and Your Eyes

    Hi Carly! Kat's here -- as requested! :D So, on to it! The first thing I'd like to point out, is how cliche it sounds. How so very normal, regular. ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Glimpse of Green

    Hey Incognito! Kat's here for a review! Nit-picks! Every single night, I would stand in that doorway, fingers ready to flick the lights off once and for all, but I ...

    Jun 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Maybe the Sun Will Set Tomorrow

    Hey Shina! I'm here to review your poem, 'kay? So, stanza to stanza! Maybe the sun will set tomorrow And bring some darkness to this light My eyes now burn ...

    Jun 20, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: if I could leave you

    Mars! *claps hands* I absolutely loved this! I have nothing to add, since the above reviews covered pretty much everything. I am awfully surprised on how the lack of punctuation ...

    Jun 20, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Different

    Hi unstable! I'm Kat, and I will review your poem ;) Line(s) by line(s)! Dig a dark whole in your life, big enough to let mistakes flow in, Wrong decisions ...

    Jun 18, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: True Love

    Hi jumping jacks! I'm Kat and I will review your piece ;) Stanza to stanza! 4 hours in a car Just waiting to see you As I come into town ...

    Jun 15, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Let Me Love You(5)

    Hi rascalover! Kat's here -- as requested! I haven't read the above reviews, so if I repeat anything I'm sorry. Nit-picks: Gary was awaken by loud chatter downstairs. His scruffy ...

    Jun 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: With You

    Hey wishiwerent! I'm Kat, and I will review this piece of yours ;) Stanza by stanza comments! I bite my lip and you smile. You pull me close and the ...

    Jun 9, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hurting

    Hey Megan! Kat's here (as requested) for a review! It seems I have reviewed lots of your things :D Nit-picks: My dad was coming to pick up Will and me ...

    May 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Blind - Chapter 23 part 1

    Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep! You brought Blind back! I'm so glad you did! Nit-picks: Dress after dress being flung at you, uncharacteristically girly squeals from Helen the tomboy and having to co

    May 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Until(Part 1)

    Hi Hana! Kat's here for a review -- as requested! :D Thanks for stopping by my WRFF thread. Feel free to request more, if you're satisfied with the review! He ...

    May 24, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Mages

    Hi Mage! I'm Kat, as you probably know ^_^ So, onto your review! Yellow, orange and red leaves crunched under his boots as he dashed boots as he dashed past ...

    May 23, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: The Life Of A Writer

    Hi magnus! *pants from laughing too much* I only have one comment and one suggestion to make on this piece. Comment! I really liked how it was without the whole ...

    May 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Untitled

    Hi Rodhead! I'm Kat, and I will be your reviewer for today! Stanza by stanza! Were you ever afraid of letting something go? It feels like turning off a tap ...

    May 17, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: Not Another Twilight Parody!

    Pen, dear! This is awesome! As Mars, I will try to make an actual review, between my laughs. Bella: Oh em gee! You did insult me! NOT NICE! Edward! I ...

    May 16, 2009


"Storybooks and roleplays are just for fun!" To which I say: of course! But why only "just"? Sometimes fun is found in the full-send. Sometimes fun is found in taking it seriously, and aiming to do it with excellence!
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