"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
I'm new here in YWS and am looking for some reviews. I wonder if you'd like to drop by on the first few chapters of the novel I'm working on. If you'd like to, thanks in advance.
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Hey @piyaliarchives I'd love to read it! But it's saying you've got it saved as a draft not published? So I can't see it
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Thanks for the request @TypoWithoutCoffee! I will be traveling quite a bit in the next like two weeks, but I'll try to fit this in as soon as I can ^-^ Excited to read it!
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
This seems to have died done a little... I was wondering if you would review a poem... I posted it days ago and it's still in the Green Room. It's a little violent... a little bit of a rant and it's called: Born A Girl
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Hey there, Shady! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.
This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.
