"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Description: It's a story with dragons as the main characters.
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The story revolves around one tribe of dragons trying to find a way out of their homeland (a volcano has erupted laying waste to the land). The find a suitable home after three years of searching the whole continent of Megalonia. The island is filled with vegetation and animals and seems to be uninhabited by any native dragon tribes.
Notes: I've written seven chapters so far and I'm looking for someone to review each chapter in the novel and focus mainly on plot and character based criticism.
Link to Piece: The Origin: Prologue Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): It's a novel Age rating: 12+ Any other comments (Optional):Would be a great help! Thank you so much!
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Hey Shades! If you're up for it, I'd appreciate a review on my new poem! I'm not looking for specific critiques on this poem, more so just a general critique of my style and a thoughtful analysis of how the poem made you feel and how I could make those feelings more potent. I know you specialize in thoughtful analyses, so I figure I came to the right place
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If you're willing, I'm always down for more reviews on the novel I was writing for LMS! Maybe the first chapter or two, if you're so inclined or however many you feel like! I'm not looking for anything specific in the smaller chunks, so tear into whatever you like!
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@mellifera, I'll get to your reviews asap, scribberino! I am like 4 reviews away from ALL BLUE STARS and I am SO here for earning them on your lovely LMS novel.
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
I have a couple of novel chapter to offer. They are pretty much parts 2 and three so I don't think they need a synopsis but basically all that happens in the first part is this team lands at the location of a meeting and the meeting is called to order.
If you're still accepting review requests, could you check out my novel 'The Rage' that I'm currently uploading? It's a vampire novel set in a small village. It's a prequel to another novel I uploaded on here a while ago. Basically 'The Rage' is set in 2020 and the human population are discovering that vampires actually exist and live among them. I'm looking for readers willing to read chapter by chapter as I'm looking for reviews on how the story is progressing and how the characters and the relationships between them are being portrayed. Here's a link to the first chapter! The Rage (Chapter 1)
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
