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Mind checking out this poem? Please do tear it apart! I want to see if it's got potential. Thanks in advance.

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This topic feels like a graveyard >=0 Time to use some magic >=) Back in work, if somebody needs a review for free, ask!
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Hello, do you think you could review this poem for me? topic68408.html...

Thnak you,

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Hey there, Kyou!

I've seen enough of your critiques and they actually look helpful. So would you please be so helpful to help me in my poem titled: The Silent Scream

Thanks in advance. :smt001

(Sorry for the annoying repetition of a particular word) :o
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^^ Both done. I apologize for writing reviews that do not appeal to the eye and mind, but I wrote what I thought and I hope it helped at least a bit =) Best of luck.

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Hay! Me agian... I edited that poem you review, and was wondering if you would review it as well... here is the link, topic68408.html

Thanks,

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Ah, I've been washed away with Vanish to the second page! >=0 Calling S.O.S.!
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Hey there again! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks in advance! (And I promise I won't take it down before you have a chance to review it this time, sorry about that...)

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Hi there! I would be ever so grateful if you could review my poem, it is called "The Things You Never Knew." Thanks in advance, providing you accept it. :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post760233.html#p760233
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Both done! Hope it helped at least a bit =) Good luck!

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Hey, can you review my short story? Thank you, and awesome avatar ;)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=69211
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Done ^^
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Hello agian! Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? topic69314.html

Thanks
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

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