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Cheers everybody!
Has been some time since I last time stepped in here. Now I'm back and even more fired up to continue writing and also to review, of course. I offer my reviews for free, so there's no need to hold back if you're looking for people who'd give you an opinion and help you out, if possible.

Anyways, I'm going to specify what I can do for you.

I will review :
Any kind of fiction except Historical fiction and Fan-fiction. If you want to know what I'm best at, that'd be Sci-Fi and kind of Romance/Fantasy.

Poetry in overall, so far I've done the best in Dramatic Poetry.

Well, I kind of have already said what I won't review, haven't I ^^' . Anyways, If you'd like to know what I focus on in my reviews, that'd be pretty much the feeling of your story, how it feels, how is it enjoyable. Think of it as a review from a reader. Additionaly to that I of course look for grammar mistakes, confusing places and I always try to try my best at giving tips for improvement, if they are needed.

So, if you're looking for help and you don't mind posting one more post here, I'd be glad to look at your work. I usually finish the reviews in the same day as I was asked in, sometimes one day later, but not later than that.

Best regards,
Kyou ~
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Will you review my poem. It is called Today is one of those days.

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Will you review the first part of my story, and the second if you like the begining?

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My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Calligraphy : Reviewed ^^ Hope it helps.

Flower~Child : I'll get to it once I come back from study, I have to leave in 10 minutes =) Sorry for the wait.
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Hi Kyo(If I may call you so). I would like a review on my novel with only two chapters up. Its a General Fiction Novel so I think you would be interested.

Here's the link to the main page: Love Has No Boundaries

I hope you'll enjoy reading it and I think the review would be good so just tell me what to pay. Thanks a lot in advance!

~Shubhi
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I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Flower~Child : Done =) Both reviewed.

Shubhiloves2write : Sure =) I'll get to reviewing it a bit later, my eyes hurt ^^ Please bear with me a bit.
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Would you please review the first chapter of my WWII Historical Fiction novel?

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Sorrow lasts through this night
I'll take this piece of you,
and hold for all eternity
For just one second I felt whole... as you flew right through me.


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Forestqueen = Reviewed =)

Shubhiloves2write : Not done yet, though I'm working on it ^^
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Can you please Review: Baby, I love you
Its poetry
Thanks
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Hey would you take a look at this poem? Please and thank you.




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All done =) Waiting for more!
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Will you review part five to my story?

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My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Can you please review this? I'd really appreciate it. It's called A Beautiful Encounter.


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hey, Jude, don't make it bad
take a sad song and make it better
remember to let it into your heart
then you can start
to make it better.

~make books, not war~

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Both done ^^ I hope I helped.
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Will you review my flash fiction story, please?
Pleasies.



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