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Wolferion · 2010-06-14T17:40:28Z

Cheers everybody! Has been some time since I last time stepped in here. Now I'm back and even more fired up to continue writing and also to review, of course. I offer my reviews for free , so there's no need to hold back if you're looking for people who'd give you an opinion and help you out, if possible. Anyways, I'm going to specify what I can do for you. I will review : Any kind of fiction except Historical fiction and Fan-fiction. If you want to know what I'm best at, that'd be Sci-Fi and kind of Romance/Fantasy. Poetry in overall, so far I've done the best in Dramatic Poetry. Well, I kind of have already said what I won't review, haven't I ^^' . Anyways, If you'd like to know what I focus on in my reviews, that'd be pretty much the feeling of your story, how it feels, how is it enjoyable. Think of it as a review from a reader. Additionaly to that I of course look for grammar mistakes, confusing places and I always try to try my best at giving tips for improvement, if they are needed. So, if you're looking for help and you don't mind posting one more post here, I'd be glad to look at your work. I usually finish the reviews in the same day as I was asked in, sometimes one day later, but not later than that. Best regards, Kyou ~

Riveneye

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Points 1040

Reviews 8

Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:51 am

Riveneye says... · Wed Jun 23, 2010 1:51 am

Can you review these two for me. They're both fantasy and going into a novel with a bunch of other short stories.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic65637.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic65638.html

Thanks

Fiction flight is almost here. Check us out on Facebook http://www.facebook.com/pages/Fiction-Flight/130489243696865
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Wolferion

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Wed Jun 23, 2010 10:29 am

Wolferion says... · Wed Jun 23, 2010 10:29 am

F1shes : Done =)

Riveneye : I'd like to ask for some time =) I've noticed both your works are long and I've got some other stuff to take care of at the moment ^^

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda

Riveneye

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Reviews 8

Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:35 pm

Riveneye says... · Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:35 pm

It's okay I just need them finished by the end of the week if thats okay with you.

Fiction flight is almost here. Check us out on Facebook http://www.facebook.com/pages/Fiction-Flight/130489243696865
(yea we don't have a website casue we can't think of a publishing name yet.)

LittlePrincess

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Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:53 pm

LittlePrincess says... · Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:53 pm

Hey, if you don't mind I'd love if you could review my short story My Falling Sun

I only have two chapters up (in three parts) so here is what I have:
topic65564.html
topic65570.html
topic65809.html

Thank you so much and I hope you like them!

"One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes."
The Little Prince

Wolferion

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Reviews 91

Thu Jun 24, 2010 6:34 am

Wolferion says... · Thu Jun 24, 2010 6:34 am

Sure ^^ I'll finish it by today once I come back from school, so just hang on =)

Same applies to you LittlePrincess =)

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda

Wolferion

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Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:08 pm

Wolferion says... · Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:08 pm

Riveneye : Both reviewed =) Hope it helped.

Littleprincess : I've finished the 1st chapter =) I'm going to take a break and finish your 2nd chapter later.

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda

Riveneye

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Reviews 8

Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:52 pm

Riveneye says... · Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:52 pm

Thanks a bunch man.It was quite helpful especially to point out all of the commas.

Fiction flight is almost here. Check us out on Facebook http://www.facebook.com/pages/Fiction-Flight/130489243696865
(yea we don't have a website casue we can't think of a publishing name yet.)

Wolferion

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Points 12142

Reviews 91

Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:24 pm

Wolferion says... · Sun Jun 27, 2010 8:24 pm

I'm very sorry I haven't finished your two works and stopped whole review thing X_X I had a lot take care of ^^'
It's almost midnight so I have to go, but tomorrow I'll make sure I'll finish the undone and will be definitely ready to help more people

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda

jDawn

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Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:58 pm

jDawn says... · Mon Jul 12, 2010 9:58 pm

Hi! I was wondering if you could please reveiw the first chapter of my novel. It is called The Hunt. It's Fanasy, but not completly. There is no rush at all on the review so take your time! Thank You Much!

topic66825.html

- Jessica :smt001

"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3

Wolferion

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Points 12142

Reviews 91

Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:18 am

Wolferion says... · Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:18 am

Done =)

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda

spiderman

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Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:30 pm

spiderman says... · Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:30 pm

Mayt you please reveiw this http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic66956.html

Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

WHISPERS IN THE DARK LYRICS - SKILLET

Leilani

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Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:33 pm

Leilani says... · Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:33 pm

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66775 thank you ^0^

Happiness is a perfume you can not pour on others without getting a few drops on yourself <3

Wolferion

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Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:06 pm

Wolferion says... · Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:06 pm

Guess all done and I'm back from being busy with fighting myself. If somebody needs a review, I'll happily review without requesting something in return =) It's summer holidays, let's enjoy some stories.

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda

blackbird12

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Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:18 pm

blackbird12 says... · Tue Jul 20, 2010 11:18 pm

Would you mind reviewing this for me? Thank you in advance!

topic67224.html

If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.
-Mary Oliver

Wolferion

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Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:06 am

Wolferion says... · Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:06 am

Done! Hope it helped =)

~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~
-Formerly Shinda

It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small.
— Neil Armstrong

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