Rapid Reviews

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Pretty please Don't need a full review as its not more than a few paragraphs...just want to know if its worth carrying on with

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Please could you review this please? It is an Action/Adventure but I really would like a full review which includes all aspects including the grammar, the characters, the plot etc.
Thank you.

Even though it has taken me forever, I am finally caught up with reviews and ready for more! I have changed what I will and will not review, so you might be interested in checking that out. Snoink has awakened the poetry critique within me! Anyways, keep them coming people!!

Adventures of a Traveler: A Dark World
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I need a really harsh review, pick it apart please.

Hey girl.

I'm trying to get my friend into this site, but her work isn't being reviewed. Would you do it for me? Thanks

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Hey Moriah, I have this story called The Elemental Guardians Chapter 1.
Here's the link
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Hey fancy reviewing a bit of sarcastic, ranty humour? I know it doesn't sound all that appealing but you mentioned you commented on entertainment so here y'are:

The problem with it is topic57293.html (My first ever featured bit of work! XD)
It's a disaster topic57357.html
Could it be more ridiculous? topic57694.html
Dictionary part one topic57771.html (not actually a "dictionary" just some satirical defintions...)

All extracts from my column based book. Take as long as you like!
Cheers,
Ben

Could you please review my Action/Adventure story?

The Janitors - Prologue:

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All reviews have been completed. Sorry it has taken me so long. This next week I will probably not be able to do any reviews as I will be getting my wisdom teeth pulled. Feel free to post your reviews, just know that it may take awhile to get a review from me.

Right, Hera Moriah! Thanks for The Janitors review. I have a friend who's kinda new, only 11 and I think she needs a better review than mine. Please review. She postedl ike 8 chapters and doesn't understand the turn off factor. Anyway, see what you can do:

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Thanks

Moriah Leila*

i would like you to review my story'SOmewhere Lost' from Action/Adventure section.I know it's not your favourite genre but give it a try.

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