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Re: Among the Dragons - Chapter 4.2
by IcyFlame in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


Re: The Forgotten Kingdom of Ora - Chapter 3
by Horisun in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


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by IcyFlame in Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure


Re: 2050 by RPD (Chapters 1 + 2)
by ShallowHouse in Novel / Chapter » Realistic


Re: The Accidental Magic: chapter 6
by Horisun in Novel / Chapter » Fantasy


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  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Among the Dragons - Chapter 4.2

    Ok I'm not going to repeat my comments about this scene in general from the last part because you don't need to hear it twice so I'm just going to ...

    IcyFlame
    IcyFlame - 22 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    The Forgotten Kingdom of Ora - Chapter 3

    Hello! And Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! I loved how you described the setting in this chapter! I felt a tad claustrophobic while reading this, ...

    Horisun
    Horisun - 23 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Among the Dragons - Chapter 4.1

    Happy Review Day! Sorry this has taken me so long, but if you're doing a revamp at least it can be a little while before I disappoint you again with ...

    IcyFlame
    IcyFlame - 34 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    2050 by RPD (Chapters 1 + 2)

    Hullo there! The name's Shallow, and I've read your work! Now, this here's a real nice and interesting two chapters, I have to say! I'll go into Chapter 1 for ...

    ShallowHouse
    ShallowHouse - 34 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    The Accidental Magic: chapter 6

    Hello! Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! First things first, what a cliffhanger! I love how with every chapter, you continue to keep your readers on ...

    Horisun
    Horisun - 40 minutes ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural
    It ended at Midnight -Chapter 11

    Hello, and Happy Review Day! I'm not exactly surprised at how horribly their first interaction went, but I must admit, I am disappointed in Jacks conduct here. If he's going ...

    Horisun
    Horisun - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Other » Dramatic, Romantic
    I will Love You for the Rest of My Life

    This dialogue is very nicely written, many phrases sound very poetic and add a loving but also conservative aura to the text. The way they both talk in 3rd person ...

    MissSaigon
    MissSaigon - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Short Story » Fantasy, Fanfiction
    Nassir the friendly hypno-snake

    I like The Jungle book and this fanfic is amazing! It seems like Amaya and Nassir are going to be great friends. Hopefully they’ll be alright, but who knows? This ...

    vampricone6783
    vampricone6783 - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    My Goodbye Poem.

    hello!! this is a very beautiful poem. you described growth so well, the idea of striving for a better life, then realizing that YOU have to give yourself that life, ...

    waterfalls
    waterfalls - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » Review, Literature
    Book thief .

    This poem was very inspiring but also deep. It hits very hard as you compared positive beautiful things like snowflakes whom we have grown fond of and associate with the ...

    MissSaigon
    MissSaigon - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 4.4

    Woot woot, I’m finally caught up! (To the last posted chapter, at least. >.>) It looks like things are getting even more interesting here, with the time shenanigans… And ee! ...

    Spearmint
    Spearmint - 1 hour ago

  • Reviews » Other » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Clowns, magic, murder, and lies-Five Short Stories

    Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was quite a few little stories ...

    KateHardy
    KateHardy - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic
    The complicated life of magical girls

    Hi Sunflowerdemon3712! This is neat! I'm a big fan of any magic :') The two main characters are really something. Cypress is aggressive and standoffish in the first chapter, but ...

    Lovestrike
    Lovestrike - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    War Beasts Chapter 1

    Hey! Overwatchful here for a quick review! I think you did a pretty good job with this first chapter! You set up the story well, and it left me looking ...

    Overwatchful
    Overwatchful - 2 hours ago

  • Reviews » Poetry » General, General
    My Goodbye Poem.

    Hello I'm @thediffident. Here's a review of your wonderful piece :) I absolutely adored this poem! The way you described the stage of addiction, realisation and redemption was truly phenomenal. ...

    Thediffident
    Thediffident - 3 hours ago


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