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Hi! I liked your story - I like the humor with which you picked up the topic of punishments in hell. And the fact that people invented everything boring and ...

“She looked familiar to me, but I knew nothing by about her.” Starts with two people who don’t know each other. They become best friends and then grow apart :(

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - William, Taury, and his friends go to visit ...

Rose recovers at the guild

When I smiled: OK, to start out. I like how Thundur was just so tcked off that Kita was still needed. Her stubborn refusal to accept Kita's apology and other ...

I think I've come across my favorite story yet here on YWS! I like your storytelling style - it's fluent and sometimes a bit too simple, but full of little ...

#21 A Broken Machine Poetic Style - 5 - Visual/Found Inspiration - 3 - Song Theme Coin Flip - N/A - N/A Lyric: N/A A scientist, an actor could be ...

Plastic and Factory Settings Today's Inspiration: Today’s song was Factories by Autoheart. I rolled Freeverse based on the song title. i am mass-produced in that i am easily broken under ...

I really enjoyed your story from beginning to end. I like how we see the narrator's view of Goe at the beginning - the descriptions of the scenery and the ...

Oh my, it's amazing! I love how smooth rhymes go. Also the working with theme you choosed is very well. It's cool how we through whole poem watch how their ...

Short little something I made up in the middle of the night. (Read at your own risk!)

This is the first play i have read on here, its very interesting. There is a bit of confusion as to why Luna's mom is at the school, but other ...

Hello Hello I know you might not see this but I wanted to give some older works a shot, Overall this is a very smooth piece with a few typos ...

So excited for all the new characters!!! Let's get this show on the road : D

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : This is quite a lovely little tale here, ...

Yesss I need to finish developing mine >.>