Young Writers Society

When you can't reach the train handles and a convenient arm is right there...

Nice work done by the author (as always). All your poems are just amazing. This whole poem would sound so cool as a rap. "The clowns are doing their job ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary This is probably one of my favorite chapters so far! It had me hooked from beginning to end! From the anticipation up to the fight ...

A few things: first is formatting feedback. I'd take out the 'chapter x's because the story flows much better without the addition of the titles and honestly, in my experience, ...

05/06/24 everything I see here is just a half-truth. I watch you lunge for the next photo, contorting your people into poses—a hand on a shoulder, mouths gaping with laughter, ...

I read the first paragraph and instantly thought wow. Your use of descriptive language is sooo amazing!!!! The vocabulary, chefs kiss! I mean just take a look at the wording ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “I see. Well, the other girls are in the powder room to your left, but you may help yourself to any outfits in the dressing ...

He would figure it out eventually; how to find a home.

Oh wow! That kind of took me by surprise. Firstly, the tone of the story is amazing! almost feels a little past tense, which adds to the overall impact of ...

What an empowering story! Your pacing as an author kept me reading, I couldn't look away. The predicament of the characters truly adds to the sense of urgency within the ...

What a moving narrative! First off, the title drew me in. Second, the author's use of vocabulary certainly elevated and added to the overall effect quite splendidly. The author's use ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary To mirror what Avian said not very long ago, I think I have a new favorite character… I saw on your wall somewhere that you ...

heyo! I noticed you review on quite a lot of things. I also noticed that this was a poem and decided to review it once I saw it was you ...

I got a very minor, but weird bug going on. [pretext: I'm using DuckDuckGo on a laptop with Windows 10. I've already restarted everything, even my wifi router (unintentionally lol), ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary The Valencia Desert was a wide-ranged land filled with hot sand and sun. The sky was a pink hue, with dunes layered as far as ...

A sequel to Circus Freak, Circus Rose, Circus Marionette, Circus Petals, and Circus Story.