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Hi! I am here with a review of this work. The overall first impression looks pretty good. I see minor typos (I'm sure there should be commas in some sentences ...

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Rose is given two days to clean her ...

A poem about lost friends and synesthesia

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Josephine imagined standing beneath star-lit skies on the darkest of nights, where the heavens stretched endlessly above her, adorned with countless shimmering conste

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Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary With a sudden, savage snarl, Cerberus lunged forward, its three heads converging on Jase with terrifying precision. Before the monster could reach him, Josephine took

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Persephone sighed and closed her eyes for the first time in hours. The eyebags under her waterline were starting to get irritated. She needed sleep. ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary All of the souls in the Underworld awaited judgment; some would be tortured for the rest of eternity and others would live peacefully in the ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Unless you obey and cut all ties with Josephine, you will no longer be allowed in the Underworld. I do not take well to the ...

I have finally returned! Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Overall, writing was beautiful. A bit of nerdy rambling here…I was so hyped to read this chapter that I just had ...

RazorSharpPencil -> Razor

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary It’d was like the entire world was being split apart and reassembled. Like her bones were no longer in her flesh, simply suspended within. I ...

Taking place in modern-day South Korea, one day, Nuri encounters a mysterious, ethereal blonde-haired boy. Who is he? How did end up in enher house??

Alright, mine is up! whenever you guys have the time, you can let me know what you think, and if you want to suggest a change, I can edit it ...

Thank you again for requesting a review on my review page! Now, let’s get into this glorious story! Hello there! ~ Writing Commentary James brushed his hands together. The toasty ...