Young Writers Society

Hello Hello, I am here for a short but hopefully worthwhile review. Forgive me if this is a light on feedback as I don't have much to say after this ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! First Impression : Well this was quite the powerful tale. I ...

Must say, this looks quite good and I must give my compliments. But I found two spelling errors in the text I feel you might want to know about. One ...

Hi Everyone! I hope this is a good place to put a question like this. I've been planning a longer-form story (even longer than some of my recent posted works ...

I love the evolution of Janet! ^^ A little tip, maybe make one post and then add all the pictures of her in there with their subtitle, or else it ...

also technically a paragraph, if I had to pick just one line I suppose it would be the last sentence. Space, is a deep, deep place. Full of many things: ...

Murders in the Brook.

if it gives anyone comfort like 30 of these characters will be in the background and not have major POV roles or anything

This work is amazing! it is powerful, and visual, and flat out incredible! I am deeply moved by the conversation the narrator is having. It piques my interst when you ...

Time for a Black Cat Review!! MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Hello Again, My Friend! It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh ...

Wow is my first opinion of this. I loved reading your poem, and hearing how it flows. Your rhyming skills are incredible!! I often find myself struggling to rhyme, so ...

"Circus Wall" is a raw and introspective poem that delves into the complexities of decision-making and the consequences that follow. Through vivid imagery and a compelling narrative, the poet explores

Xavier's origin story

"Blooming Rose" is a delicate yet profound poem that captures the essence of love, loss, and remembrance through the imagery of a rose garden. The poet skillfully intertwines the beauty ...