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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
My Prolouge!Hello Stranger! ~ Writing Commentary Oooo, interesting first chapter! I can only wonder what this story will be like continuing forward. It seems there is a mysterious ghostlike figure stealing ...
goodolnoah - 29 minutes ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 29: Over My Dead BodyHello again! ~ Writing Commentary Woah! This chapter certainly had a lot of great moments! Josephine watched with teary eyes as thunder cracked outside of the shed, causing her to ...
goodolnoah - 60 minutes ago
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Reviews » Short Story » Humor, General
Bella and the black boxHi, I'm Swifite13 and I'm reviewing your work today. First of all, I liked this story even though I didn't understand it all the way. What was the point of ...
Swiftie13 - 1 hour ago
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Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
My Prolouge!A Prolouge for my new story! :)
Swiftie13 - 1 hour ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 28: Connecting the DotsHello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase knew that she was more than just a wise deity. Jase knew that there was some sort of resilience and savagery that stayed cloaked ...
goodolnoah - 2 hours ago
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Reviews » Poetry » Chickens, Horror
The MonsterHey, KaeRae here! Just wanted to review your story while I was reading it. First of all, I don't have a fear of chickens, but the way you described them ...
KaeRae88 - 3 hours ago
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Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
else (or something i hadn't said before)else i am to cry i think you should tear my tears away
herbalhour - 3 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
The Daughter of War - Chapter 27: BloodlineHello again! ~ Writing Commentary The healers, thank gods, were able to successfully remove all roots and growths from her brain, only leaving a few in Persephone’s lungs. Good to ...
goodolnoah - 6 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 26: ReflectionsHello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase glanced around them and rolled his eyes as a group of men cheered at a table closer to the bar. A small, petite, brunette ...
goodolnoah - 7 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 25: The Temple of ApolloHello again! ~ Writing Commentary He was created by magic, therefore smashing all the odds that he really was a dickface like all the other kin of the sea. As ...
goodolnoah - 7 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
The Daughter of War - Chapter 24: Coral, Crimson, and CreamHello again! ~ Writing Commentary a long strand of blackness extending from his fingertips to the book Josephine was looking at. The LORE, so yummy. I liked the section where ...
goodolnoah - 7 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 23: Vengeance and LustHello again! ~ Writing Commentary The whole scene with Persephone, and this chapter was a rollercoaster of emotions. Especially the scene with Persephone and Josephine having a heartfelt conversation.
goodolnoah - 8 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Daughter of War - Chapter 22: They All Fall DownHello again! ~ Writing Commentary Persephone hesitated but closed her eyes, her chestnut silken locks falling from the intricate bun that Josephine had spent hours working on for her. Among ...
goodolnoah - 8 hours ago
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Forums » Lounge, The
Planning or Pantsing?Thank you for all the great responses! I find, nowadays, that fully planning out a story burns me out by the end. I had fully planned out a story which ...
goodolnoah - 9 hours ago
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Poetry » Chickens, Horror
The MonsterThis poem talks about a fear I have had since I was around the age of 2. A bad experience with this creature has made me fearful of its presence.
VeryBerry - 10 hours ago
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Reviews » Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
The Adventures of Rose Hood Chapter 38: Thus Begins the BattleHello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Wrath + Pride’s army arrives. In addition to ...
vampricone6783 - 12 hours ago