And My Uncle?(just trying to get point across)

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Chevy
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Wed Mar 02, 2005 4:22 pm
Chevy says... · Wed Mar 02, 2005 4:22 pm
This is a really stupid poem I just wrote about me...and my uncle. It's true. And I know it's stupid but, it's the only way I could put it.

something is wrong and
it has been for
three years
my chest is hurting
my heart is racing
since i was 12
but i go to the doctor

he says nothings wrong
but
my heart is racing

its like
somebodys stabbing me--
but he says nothings wrong

and thats the same thing he said about my uncle
and my uncle?
he's dead now.
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.
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Green Monkey
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Wed Mar 02, 2005 6:23 pm
Green Monkey says... · Wed Mar 02, 2005 6:23 pm
Man, a poem like that really gets me worried..... That's pretty sad. Sounds um... bad... Though your poem is sad it is also very well written.......
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Liz
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Fri Mar 04, 2005 9:45 am
Liz says... · Fri Mar 04, 2005 9:45 am
Simple yet emotive.
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