fairy tales for a sad boy.

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Gah, small font. Anyway..

That's a nice poem. I like it. There's one line.. "wishing we were someone" that doesn't flow to me.. You go from plural to singular.. Kinda strange. But then again, not much makes sense to me right now.

Anyway, keep up the great work!
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aghhh! my eyes!!!,lol.
i liked this poem. don't ask me why, but it reminded me of "the red" by chevelle which is one of my favorite songs/videos.
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.




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I loved the last line. '...sometimes'

ha ha. Cool

No comment. Though i did post something. Like you said.
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