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Works that you would like reviewed! <3

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  1. Me again...

    When The Heart Sings Alone

    Sonnet 2 ( Service Of Love )

    Beauty Lies In The Eyes Of Love
  2. I am recommending a friend, RobbieFava He's a fantastic writer and I don't think enough people are reading his work: The Passenger

    It's rated 18+ so be warned!!



    The Passenger: Chapter One



    The Passenger: Chapter Three

    The Passenger: Chapter Four

    The Passenger: Chapter Five


    Loves!
  3. Don't know why chapter two didn't come up...

    The Passenger: Chapter Two
  4. These are mine!

    Poetry:
    Just Free.

    Short:
    My People

    This is a romance story. It's rated 18+. You've been warned.

    Perfectly Imperfect: Prologue
    Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One
  5. About Olive's post, I totally agree. He is fantastic, and now onto talking about me. XD
    Devil Touch - Chapter One don't think I'll edit anymore, but you never know!
    Devil Touch - Chapter Two yeah, feedback would be great.
    Devil Touch - Chapter Three same here, also what you think of the plot and all
    There is a prologue which helps with chapter three but I don't need reviews on that. Hope you like, I guess in some places it's a little, smidgeny violent, so if you don't like blood I would skip chapter two and PM me for a summary.
  6. If anyone would like review this, I'd be grateful. I need to see where I need to improve in my poetry. (Do I need more over dramatizing? Less? Or is it okay? Terrible?) :3

    Incoherent Plea of The Possessed=http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=102846
  7. Okay, this is something that GriffinClaw and I co-wrote, and so in a sense I am also asking for Grif. It's called The Pack - Prologue thanks!
  8. Hi, this is Kman134 and I would like it if someone would review my work:

    Magician X, Chapter 1:First Semester, First Hell.
  9. My latest poem, Sleepless thoughts
  10. Magician X chapter 3 has been posted.


There is nothing to fear from someone who shouts.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart